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Personally, I believe that each of us must follow himself , if not violated his rights and freedoms . And of course, to defend them . And also, and this is important — respect the rights of others, no less than their own . Then our state can be called legal .

    I think that if all people will respect their own and others’ rights , the world would be much less grief , tears and injustice.

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    Personally, I believe that each of us must follow himself . And  protect their rights if they are violated. Also important — respect the rights of others. Then our state can be called legitimate. 
    I think that if all people will be respect rights of others, in the world would be much less grief, tears and injustice.

  • Personally I believe that each of us must follow himself, if it doesn’t violate his rights and freedoms. And of course if it doesn’t defend them. And this is important to respect the rights of others no less than yours. Then our state can be called legal. I think if all people respect their own and other’s rights, there will be much less tears, grief and injustice in the world.